Update 1: First Impressions
September 24, 2013 4:00 am
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Major point to make before we go forward: if you’re viewing the site on a mobile device, we’re not 100% ready on those. Mobile versions are coming really soon, but for now optimal viewing of the site and comic is on your desktop. Sorry about that, but its change is nigh.
I’m never happy with my first pages. It took me two or three projects to learn the whole “you need to hook the reader with a big, splashy opening” angle. Then I realized that was more like a gimmick than a real suggestion.
I think I can finally say, I’m pleased with how we kicked things off. I’ve had this opening in my head for two years: two plucky engineers looking for their payday by pitching some new ship designs to the government brass. I’m betting things work out really well.
Looks good so far, Sal! I’ll definitely be looking forward to following this story as it develops.
Thanks a lot! Looking forward to more feedback as we go 😉